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Re: writing challenge 4-17
Yes, you're right. I completely forgot about this until now. I did some of the speech marks where they need to be. Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. How did ...
Jan 26, 2008 -
Re: The Black Cat
I enjoyed it. The only parts that give me trouble are: "touching, nevertheless it was touch, But a stupid touch all the same," Stupid isn't the best word to use ...
Jan 8, 2008 -
Re: My Preface
Preface: I once awoke from sleep and inquired to myself of the creation of Earth. Three spirits from within me answered: The Poet, The Priest, and The Scientist. Their voices ...
Jan 2, 2008 -
Re: I am God's Ventriloquist
I'm glad you liked it, you seem to be the only one who's had anything to say about it. I kind of am writing a novel sized something-or-other, and I ...
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: Smoke (your worries away)
"I now realize I smoke for simply one reason, and that is spite. I hate you non-smokers with all of my little black fucking heart, you obnoxious, self-righteous, whining little ...
Jan 1, 2008 -
Re: I am God's Ventriloquist
"Hello, is this James Dobson?" "No." Hang up. Ring! Again the three sirens. He picked up the phone. "I'm quite sure it is, or at least he must be close ...
Dec 29, 2007 -
Re: My Harp
Yes, well, when I saw I inspired someone to write, a sense of joy came over me.
Jul 21, 2007 -
Re: My Harp
eh, I found it insipid and a regurgitation of every other poem ever written. A dull watered-down rendition of my poem. Too long, diluted, and usual.
Jul 19, 2007 -
Re: Charlie
I could see this as a spoken word piece, if the right silences were added. But if not, then I agree with the posts written before me.
Jun 27, 2007 -
Re: Of Bees and Strings
I'm taking your squirming as a compliment.
Jun 27, 2007 -
Re: Of Bees and Strings
Thank you all for reading. Firstly Kylan, Why would you read a poem about anything? The poem was clearly about my musical endeavers being compared to sex. You made the ...
Jun 21, 2007 -
Re: Of Bees and Strings
I smoke you and my tongue tingles from your piss. I drink your words from their source; I am the whirling delirious. Strung up and hollow you lay. My bow ...
Jun 20, 2007 -
Re: Cleft
Can someone say something?
May 5, 2007 -
Re: Time Travel
Read Korzybski. Nothing happens to be simply either/or. I happen to agree with William Burroughs on this subject of time, fate, and freewill. "Nothing is inevitable until it happens." We ...
May 3, 2007 -
Re: ether
Ether I am. Either that, or Thither I go. Fundamentally attributing Everything I know Of you and them To what I see In the moment. [I am] A fool that ...
May 3, 2007
