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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Cut Off

    No dear, no no no. First off, you don't capitalise the start of every line. You only employ the capital when particular emphasis on words that need them, otherwise, you're ...

    Mar 26, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Preface

    Okay...I didn't think this was very good. Firstly, you have several cases of falling into a prose trap of where you write too many words where only a few, sometimes ...

    Mar 19, 2009


It suddenly struck me that that tiny pea, pretty and blue, was the Earth. I put up my thumb and shut one eye, and my thumb blotted out the planet Earth. I didn't feel like a giant. I felt very, very small.
— Neil Armstrong