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~NOVEL THREAD~ I'm posting this as R, due to there being several instances of lust incidents. There are also undertones of necrophilia, homosexuality, celestial lust, and dire envy. There's also ...

No dear, no no no. First off, you don't capitalise the start of every line. You only employ the capital when particular emphasis on words that need them, otherwise, you're ...

Okay, thanks. :) This is going to sound rather...retorting, if you like but if you mean to add capitals at the start of every line, you don't do that...it's only ...

Burn, although a constant chain of cycle and circle it would never cease to amaze. The finite details that spread into a dawned history; seething more than the greatest of ...

Well...hmm... There's not really a reason why she attacked. She's very much a slave to instinct. The cologne is his blood, and try as she might, she can't resist it. ...

Okay...I didn't think this was very good. Firstly, you have several cases of falling into a prose trap of where you write too many words where only a few, sometimes ...

Hooray! I was super-fantastical and brilliant in every way and actually remembered that I set up an account here. Anyway, reply time! Pet projects vary, and they often get caught ...

Why, hello there. I'm here for the sake of writing, and upon shear desperation of not receiving or having to give a response of "it was great!" and hope to ...