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Re: The Resurrection of Lefendor.
I Made this entire story up in my head, so I wrote it down. I plan to make it into 2 books. One book of Lefendor. One book of Meflin ...
Dec 23, 2009 -
Re: God's Tears
I disagree with Wooster. That was a great story, and reminds me of my two little brothers. I enjoyed reading this, thanks.
May 25, 2009 -
Re: Bulimia.
Amazing, reminds me of my freshman year. It's almost hard to understand, kind of. There is so many metaphores people could aquire from this poem, I think that's good. I ...
May 25, 2009 -
Re: Magic and Mischief (Prologue)
Way to much description, and your story is a bit confusing. I understand that it is a prologue, but you need to make it a little more interesting. I bet ...
May 25, 2009 -
Re: Chalk to the Sidewalk
I really liked the poem. I read ALOT of poems and this was one of my favorites, mainly because it reminds me of myself. I try so hard to erase ...
Jul 29, 2008 -
Re: Shadows : Chapter 1
I really liked it. But you used ALOT of discriptive words. I have read tons of books, and I noticed that the more popular books don't have alot of descriptive ...
Jul 28, 2008 -
Re: The Truth About Queens
That's kind of funny. You do have a point though, no one tries to look at it from the evil queens perspective. Adults try to teach childeren right and wrong, ...
Jul 28, 2008 -
Re: all these little things
That's really good. You could make some money off of stuff like that.
Jul 28, 2008 -
Re: Edward's Journal
The Lost pages of Edward’s journal Lost in the cold abyss I watched the blood flow from my wrist, I felt the pain but didn't care. This would show them ...
Jul 28, 2008
