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Re: Never Danced
Hey there! Just a few things: I'm your best friend but now she is too. Here's where the big problem comes in We are both in love with you (I ...
Dec 28, 2008 -
Re: Time
I made a few of the changes suggested above. Thank you for your time. I will review some other work asap. oxox CoolCatElly
Dec 28, 2008 -
Re: A Christmas Story
Nate Thanks for the review. Yea I will definitely edit this when I have. The bit with the magnets - yup, I'll change that, but my brain was too fuzzy, ...
Dec 27, 2008 -
Re: A Christmas Story
A Christmas Story It was the night before Christmas In a dark corner of the house Jackson Blake was stirring Quietly as a mouse Creeping on tiptoes Sneaking like a ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: Time
Hey All If you read this, thanx and a late Merry Christmas! I basically sat there not 5 minutes ago, going "I'm bored, I think I'll write a poem" and ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: Time
TIME Seconds. Hours. Minutes. Days. Weeks. Months. Years. It flies, drags on, runs away with us We lose it, wish for more of it Curse it, dismiss it It heals ...
Dec 26, 2008 -
Re: Sixty Miles
Hey there everyone, just in case you didn't understand this: The poem's about an old man who is, you guessed it, 60 years old. He just thinks back to this ...
Oct 3, 2008 -
Re: The Locket
I don't know...maybe if I got lots of positive reviews XD
Oct 3, 2008 -
Re: Don't Forget
Hey,ok, content wise, I loved it BUT Your lines are a bit too long for me, and they don't flow that well. It would have been nice if there was ...
Oct 3, 2008 -
Re: How?
I was told that if you love someone put their name in a circle not a heart, a heart can break but a circle goes on forever. that, right there, ...
Oct 3, 2008 -
Re: Sixty Miles
Sixty miles Sixty miles down the road They tell me that Iām almost there now I laugh to hide the inner shudder As their words bring back the old memory ...
Oct 3, 2008 -
Re: The Locket
Hey everyone...just to let you know this thing pasted a bit weirdly...with lots of spaces in between. That wasn't me, just the site XD
Oct 3, 2008 -
Re: The Locket
NOTE TO THE READER Firstly, yes my main character is called Bella...but I wrote this before I ever heard of Twilight XD The preface was just a little something I ...
Oct 3, 2008 -
Re: Curiosity Killed the Cat
Hey, I'm the first to post! :) First off, I don't have much time before I get booted off the computer so I'll make this snappy. I've only read the ...
Oct 3, 2008 -
Re: Curiosity Killed the Cat
Elene ā Rough Draft PREFACE It was cold and dark, but she was there. She knew it was wrong. She knew she shouldn't have come; she had heard the owl, ...
Sep 27, 2008
