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Re: Apart, Chapter One: Cold
Great writing, I love it. Of course a few things, can be fix but can't everything? I like how long it is it's great for me because it is the ...
Jun 30, 2015 -
Re: The Balloon Man
It's not bad but spelling and punctuation could be use a little better. Also a little more description, would be wonderful. Overall good, keep on writing!
Jun 30, 2015 -
Re: The Balloon Man
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Jun 30, 2015
It's not bad but spelling and punctuation could be use a little better. Also a little more description, would be wonderful. Every writer needs to improve, no one is perfect. ...