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ConverseFireGirl

ConverseFireGirl

  • Writers Corner Re: Criticism.

    I haven't had a really bad critique before, but there was one rather recent one, where the user quite clearly said my work didn't have structure and the sentences were ...

    Dec 30, 2013


More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes