ConfusedGlasses

Thanks a lot dude!!!

Yeah I think it sounds better if you say IN THE SICK AIR. Oh and I just noticed that you wrote TREATMANT. And no the rhythm was completely unintentional :p

Okay, is it just me or did my eyes auto correct these mistakes? I swear I remember the text exactly as you said it Aurora. Well, I just suggest you ...

Okay, is it just me or did my eyes auto correct these mistakes? I swear I remember the text exactly as you said it Aurora. Well, I just suggest you ...

Thanks a lot for the review! Now just to explain some things, and confess some things, I tried to combine the modern style of short, simple sentences with the formal ...

Thanks once more Birkhoff! I really appreciate how you go out of your way to point out the mistakes I made and the places where I could improve. I think ...

Thanks a bunch man! Once again you made my day. Yeah so I think I'm going to go over the chapter after I'v written some more. My head is swimming ...

see?

Let me just add something about the matter over here. It's been a couple years since this started. There was this guy in my class I found myself falling for. ...

Well if you think so. But you know I think it's best if a chapter is in one piece and not in parts. Besides, it's gonna cost you more points...

WOW You left me speechless... But I'm gonna try to say some thing anyway. It was very creative of you to come up with this piece of work. I couldn't ...

Oh My God! Thank you so much for that awesome review! So I took your advice and fixed some stuff in here. Thanks a lot! And in case you haven't ...

I will definitely read your works!

Why thank you so very much for bringing my work out of the green room! Sorry. Did I sound too formal? Anyway thanks a lot for the review! I will ...

No its completely fine whatever length you choose it to be. I'm just saying that the length can sometimes discourage readers. But hey, if they really wanna read they aren't ...