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ConfusedGlasses

  • Short Story » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Mindlocked

    I must agree that this really is very depressing. I Don't know how you came up with something like this. I guess i don't want to know either. But i ...

    Apr 12, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Grace

    I really don't know how i could possibly review this. But I'm going to try. So, in this line "... that of which I had to pry from her stiff ...

    Apr 11, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Annabelle

    That is nice. I know you wanted it to sound sad but there was something that ruined the mood. I can't exactly put my finger on it. Don't get me ...

    Apr 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Planes

    Hey this is CoonfusedGlasses here. Its a weird name, i know... Anyway, this story is really nice. I like how everything unfolds at the perfect pace and place. But i ...

    Apr 10, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Romantic Re: Balloons

    This is really touching indeed. I really like how the blue water balloon was so symbolic. But the time skip was kinda confusing when you did it first. But rather ...

    Apr 10, 2014
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Shadows

    That was a very interesting piece to read. One thing caught my eye though. If Lauren can see ghosts, it means she's something special too. I think it would turn ...

    Apr 8, 2014


When a body moves, it's the most revealing thing. Dance for me a minute, and I'll tell you who you are.
— Mikhail Baryshnikov