Confused.pirate

Wow these photos are beautiful! I'm no expert on photography so I'm just here to review :) I really like the ones you took with point and shoot :) I ...

No problem! Always here to help :)

I really enjoyed this piece :) The beginning really captivated my attention, asking myself questions on why he was in the situation he was. Finding the house really exposed the ...

Wow I really really enjoyed this piece! Especially how you started with complex stanzas and continued to end with one word phrases. I'm not expert on poetry but I can ...

So you wrote that this is part of your novel, correct? So is there previous posts on this particular subject? It would help the understanding of this short excerpt :) ...

This was a beautifully written prologue. Fantastic imagery and description. There are only a few points I would like to bring to your attention.. Instead of aiding me through the ...

thanks! About the Italian was actually supposed to be in Spanish..but now that i think of it..I should make it Italian! lol.

This was a very enjoyable piece. You could feel the emotional connection between you and your writing. I don't have too much to critique on beings that the previous critic ...

“Take a left at the light and keep going until you make it to the railroad tracks.” I was starting to get an idea to where Justin was leading me, ...

wow this was really really good. Deep too. Watch in line twelve: Misfortunes is spelled incorrectly. You might want it to flow a little better? But otherwise it was great! ...

Driving to Michelle’s apartment I didn’t know what to expect. Our “girl’s nights” ranged from full on partying to mini-counseling sessions. I was in a particularly good mood at that ...

I actually did get my story from a dream I had. I remembered it so well after I woke up i IMMEDIATELY wrote it down in my journal the basic ...

I really like how different this is. I've never really read anything like it. I don't think i would call this her "will" though, because it doesn't really tell them ...

I really like your few opening paragraphs :) Gives an easy understanding to the relationship between the couple. We stood on carpet colored a puke shade and the walls stood ...

This is my first romantic fiction story and I would love to hear on what you think! Chapter One “Excuse me, but have you seen Justin Rudolph?” I tapped a ...