Confused.pirate

Beautiful photos, and such interesting fungi! ;) I personally like the lighting and angle on the very first photo. The sun shining down through the leaves and the shadows give ...

This is interesting and extremely philosophical. I like the different topics you covered throughout, even if the excerpt was kind of short. (Which is fine!) There's a few awkward sentences ...

Thanks so much :) Every small bit helps :)

I wrote this for the Common App, and need it to be proofread as SOON AS POSSIBLE! I'm trying to send in my app quickly. I will love you forever ...

Justin helped me into his slightly clunky ’93 Chevy. He maintained it quite nicely, despite the driver’s seat being a tad broken and some white paint on the bumper chipping ...

Thanks guys. It's extremely apparent that I'm not a poet..usually I post in the short story portion of the website. Thanks for the criticism anyway! If I someday write another, ...

So I quickly wrote this this morning to express my crazy confusing emotions about this one guy..it's very rough so I'd love your criticism (: Enjoy! ~~~ You are absolutely ...

I really enjoyed this! The icicles part was clever. I especially loved the "..toes, sneaking through my socks." I like the message too, saying "you can't know I'm ordinary." Great ...

These are very pretty :) I like the ducks' reflections in the water. The purple flowers are pretty too, but maybe you want to zoom in on one like you ...

Can people still speed critique my romantic fiction novel even though it's before the date snoink mentioned? :)

I've been gone for almost a year and now I've returned!! I doubt anyone knows me but who cares!!! btw...I would love critique on my stories :) the "Stay Forever" ...

Wow thanks Lily! :)

Yeah it's really not that great. I actually wrote it for school quite a while ago but I felt like publishing it to see what other people think. Thanks tho!

Burn, fill us with warmth You make us feel happy And filled with joy. You make me feel this way, But not as much as love, I say. For it ...

Wow this was really really good :) Your use of diction is exquisite. Great job! Keep writing!