Confused.pirate

Wow I really like this! You made such a simple subject so deep and interesting. I love the description you used to convey her emotions in her situation. My favorite ...

Very interesting, never would have thought of the idea of making a fanfiction for an Oompa Loompa in Willy Wonka's chocolate factory! I'm a little confused with the structure, is ...

Wow, that's all I can say. Wow. Really emotional, really deep, really touching. It's hard to find subjects as serious as this. It was the perfect amount to get the ...

So far I've reviewed more than I have in months! Woohoo! New personal best for me in one day! :)

This is very interesting! I really enjoyed the ending that pulled in with the title and kind of brought together the whole piece. The only small things I have to ...

Huh, interesting idea! Catcher in the Rye...awesome book:) I can tell those phrases are from it. Maybe I'll try this sometime for fun :) Keep writing!

Hello! I'll begin with some comments about the first piece. I quite like it, especially since you didn't have anyone in particular, though you could kind of tell it was ...

You have a very powerful message in this piece, which I admire. I feel like you could rearrange some of these lines to create a more powerful poetic piece. Maybe ...

I like this! Your rhythm is smooth for the majority of the piece, and I like how you got inspired in church, it really shows! I don't have too much ...

Wow again, I really like this. You have beautiful talent at conveying your message through poetry. I really like your description in this one, with the blood and the landscape/tears. ...

Wow I really really like this poem. I can't really find anything to seriously critique, so I'm just going to say that I thoroughly enjoyed your message and your emotions. ...

I really like this! I can personally relate to your topic. It's very real and perfect to convey in a poem. I like your structure and description, I just have ...

This is powerful, and your emotions definitely come across as strong. I don't know if I would necessarily call this poetry though. It does have a structure and purpose, but ...

Hi! Since everyone already commented about the punctuation and grammar and all that lovely business, I'm just here to compliment you on your hilarity and comic genius :) Every once ...

I sat on the fountain in the courtyard waiting for Malfoy and our “date.” I was finally getting this horrible meeting over with. All I could think about was making ...