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Re: For Him Should I Let Go?
Simply beautiful. I love your poetry. It's so hard to find a piece that's so simple, yet you can truly feel the emotion in your heart when you read this. ...
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Rose Petal Liquid
Wow I really loved this. I could feel your emotion throughout every word. You obviously put a lot of thought into this, and I love it. At first I was ...
Jul 8, 2011 -
Re: Symphony of Insanity
Your theme is about a composer in a mental institution laughing at evil jokes. The music surged through my veins like a pulse. My arms waved manically while conducting the ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: My Dear Friend Depression
Hmm...I understand the point you're trying to get across, but I feel like you could have more fun with it :) Maybe instead create an argument with Depression, adding imagery ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Fox poem
Hey! I feel like you could do a lot more with this poem. You definitely have a good start with the imagery of the beautiful fox lurking through the bushes ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Ask a question here (or start a new topic!)
Hey Nate, my friend is trying to register with YWS, but he's not receiving the confirmation email. He clicked 'resend' but still nothing..and it's definitely the right email address. What ...
Jun 28, 2011 -
Re: Fairytales
I love how simple these tales are, I really enjoyed them. The fashion that they're told are really powerful and effective. I find it really awesome that you have something ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: New Inking Pens ^_^
Wow these are super cool! The last colored in girl, I loooove the colors. It's super pretty! Great job :) Those pens were worth it! ;)
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Why hellooo!
I read an amazing book and the main character was a Wiccan. I think that's pretty neat! Good luck with your group! :)
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: It Wasn't Supposed to End This Way (Chapter Nine)
Thank you guys! I made a few changes that were pointed out. Your reviews helped!
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: It Wasn't Supposed to End This Way (Chapter Three)
Thanks guys! Again, finally made the changes :)
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: It Wasn't Supposed to End This Way (Chapter Two)
Thanks guys :) I finally got around to making those quick changes to make it better. Thank you so much!
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Rain Is Coming But the Rainbow Is Already Here
Wow this is really cool! I'm assuming you made it? Awesome :) Is this an original? I quite enjoy the idea of making banners with the poems, it's really need. ...
Jun 27, 2011 -
Re: Ghost's Betrayal
The person above me covered the majority of the grammatical errors, but I have a couple of things to mention. I feel like you could have put so much more ...
Jun 26, 2011 -
Re: Friends, Dreams and Training (Chapter 2)
I was curious what this was about when I read the title, and when it was Pokemon it made my heart happy :) I love Pokemon so much...anywayy enough with ...
Jun 26, 2011
