Confused.pirate

Like amygabb wrote before me, I think this poem definitely has potential. You definitely poured your heart and soul into this, which makes it extremely rich with emotion. I'm glad ...

I love this! I feel like most of the stuff I write would be repeated from the lovely previous reviewers, but I just have to say I absolutely adore the ...

I really enjoyed this. It's beautiful, poignant, and delivers an adorable message clearly right away. Sure, this type of subject has been covered before, but I think you made it ...

I absolutely love this!! I can say right now I can DEFINITELY relate since I should currently be doing an essay...but it's not due for three days so i have ...

This is good! I think you have the body proportions down for the most part, but I think what needs the most work is the head/face. Your eyes seem a ...

Why hello mantisrox!! Welcome to Young Writers Society! My name is Sara, and if you'd ever like anything to be reviewed or have any questions feel free to ask :) ...

This is cute! There are only a few things that I want to pick out... I feel like some of the rhyming is forced...if you want to rhyme, by all ...

Church bells rang as the crowd stood up in unison to look back at the blushing bride. Virginia was beautiful, with her brown hair curled tightly and white dress elaborately ...

Whistles screech. Shoes squeak. Nets swish. Crowds scream. This is where I belong. I’m engulfed in the game, from tightening my laces, sprinting down the court, to the alarm of ...

This is good! The only thing I have to say is that it can get a little abstract, which makes it a little difficult to actually picture and visualize in ...

I had to write a 24th chapter when I was in middle school too! How neat :) Anyway, I shall begin critiquing your story...now! :D Jonas could still feel the ...

This feeling of uncertainty aches within my chest, pressing down on my heart. We should be okay, he said we were fine. You’re overthinking everything. Tears sting under my eyes. ...

Sunlight peeks through clouds and dances on the tips of blades, green and rich as moss in a swamp. Vines softly touch the stream, as if yearning to be one ...

I had to write a poem for my creative writing class that was describing an emotion without saying the emotion in the poem, except for the title. Please critique as ...

Hello! First thing I have to say....don't ever say your writing isn't that great! The fact that you came to this website and took the effort to join says a ...