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Confused.pirate

  • Confidence is Key

    I had to write this for my english class...I had to write about an exploration and discover, not final thoughts and truths. We had to write about an event in ...

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  • The Wall. (College Essay) *Need feedback!!*

    I wrote this for the Common App, and need it to be proofread as SOON AS POSSIBLE! I'm trying to send in my app quickly. I will love you forever ...

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  • Symphony of Insanity

    Spoiler! : Your theme is about a composer in a mental institution laughing at evil jokes. The music surged through my veins like a pulse. My arms waved manically while ...

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  • Forbidden

    Church bells rang as the crowd stood up in unison to look back at the blushing bride. Virginia was beautiful, with her brown hair curled tightly and white dress elaborately ...

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  • Thrust Upon A Dream (Chapter One)

    The enormous dark eagle screeched as it swooped down from the air, just barely skimming my skin before returning back into the sky. I sprinted as fast as I could ...

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