ConformandObey_ItsFun

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Yeah. That's actually exactly what it is, but I was messing with it and just separated the lines of a rant I wrote. Someone liked it and said I should ...

Firestarter- Wow. I'm extremely sorry. I was in a huge rush to get to my next class and I forgot to rate it. It won't happen again! Sorry again! -------------- ...

This wasn't meant to be a all, but it kind of ended up being a free-verse. Tell me what you think. ______________________________________ Who the hell do you think you are? ...

Cicero- Thanks for the critique. And I can't believe I missed that wails/whales thing. I feel pretty dumb right about now. And no, I don't need to rhyme, and even ...

the were not only in every household but just about in every room, Do you mean "they"? Not a big deal, just thought I would point that out, though. If ...

Wow! That was wonderful! Very impressive. I honestly don't see anywhere you absolutely need any changes. At all. Woohoo! Go you!

Well, it wasn't too bad, to be honest. It was much shorter than I would have expected, but I guess I could just call it short and sweet? Yeah, that's ...

You know, I think you have a great start. There were a few errors in there, but I think mostly everyone else has pointed them out to you. I like ...

Alrighty, first off, I would like to say that poetry is really not my thing, but I wrote this for a contest my creative writing class is entering work in. ...

~*~ As I started down the cobblestone street, I pondered to myself how I would go about getting my revenge. I had tried killing him after I had discovered he ...

Hmmm, well, there are a few things I would change about it. Though, I must say, your writing is better than mine was at your age. Good job. Keep up ...

Well, let's see... Some people are a bit picky, I must say. I can understand some of these critiques, but some are absolutely not needed. Some are trying to change ...

Sudden malaise jolted my eyes open quickly. All I could concentrate on was the unbearable pain. My skin was ardent and sweat began breaking out all over my body. Every ...

This poem is absolutely brilliant. I remember learning about the Greek gods last year, but it would never have struck me to make a poem out of it! It was ...