Confictura

Never heard of it, I don't think we have it where I live. TUBM loves the colour orange. WHAT!? I like Orange as a friend, I'm not ready to advance ...

I kind of agree with OOP, it's definitely in the "ehhh" section. first of all, It's "Spetsnaz" not "Spetznaz". Secondly, How do highly trained special force units just not see ...

Once upon a time, three little pigs built their houses. The first little piggy built his house out of straw, a wolf came along and ripped it to shreds before ...

do YOU?

I think that's the point :P I give it a 6/10, little too much stuff happening :smt002

Eat them, duh. What if you had to smile for the rest of your life, 24/7 365 days a year?

Without trying to sound like a crazy hobo living under burnside, I have to say that it'll be aliens. When we discover intelligent alien life, the world will unite. even ...

Being an agnostic with atheistic tendencies, I can point to your case and say that this is why I'm against religion. You're free to believe what you believe, practice what ...

Dating for popularity or to seem "Mature" is wrong, as many people have stated so far. However, if two people are comfortable around eachother, like talking to eachother, enjoy eachothers ...

Hello, danipower. I'm Confictura and overall I like your poem here, My main concern is a mix of signals, but we'll get to that later. I cannot tell you what ...

"Your story is about a pirate in a storeroom kicking a stove" 'Challenge accepted' There's a lone pirate sitting on a crate in the backroom of a restaurant, He'd been ...

I'm pretty good at dialogue, at least, I like to think so. My real problem is at the end. "We need to get to the house." He said "Okay, we ...

the first part can be found HERE Hydrogen Peroxide , I snatched the bottle and shook it to make sure there was still some in there. I closed the medicine ...

Hmph. I've got a strange sense of Deja Vu from reading this, like I've seen it before. Anyways, your editor is really good, you should give whoever it is props ...

You definitely need a lot of work on your structure. I think your problem is "You write like you speak" While this may be okay in some cases, this sounds ...