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  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Animalistic

    I like it, my only real confusion is about what it is. If it's a stand alone short story, it should either be longer, or have more questions answered. If ...

    May 5, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Perfect

    I don't post my poetry, usually it's very deep, personal stuff. So this is a one time thing, it doesn't rhyme that well, but it doesn't flow as a short ...

    Apr 25, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Short Stories Re: Blood Lust

    I've got a few things to say, but you may not like them. 1. I can't say I like the 'super human' nature of the character, snapping a sword in ...

    Apr 25, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: assorted art

    I love bobby joe, and all I can critique for him is that his jawbone is too slender where it connects with the rest of the skull, it should extend ...

    Apr 25, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Mailboxes and Hesitation

    I was standing in the rain next to a blue mailbox, Trench coat billowing in the wind, hesitating with the envelope in my own trembling hands. I was never this ...

    Apr 18, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Nostalgia

    Alright, I'll start off by saying that I'm not an artist, I just love coming to these forums because, well. Free art, right? :P The eyes do look too far ...

    Apr 18, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Freshly Fallen: Ch.1 'His Wish'

    Holy, holy, holy... Quite literally. I'm pretty sure there's nothing on YWS like this, correct me if I'm wrong. I think that you've done an excellant job of providing mystery ...

    Apr 17, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: MS Paint

    A tablet, (also called a "wacom Tablet" since Wacom is the leading maker of them) is a HID (human interface device) that simulates paper on the screen, it comes with ...

    Apr 9, 2011
  • Serious Discussion and Debate Re: Love

    I was reading a book some odd years ago when one of the philosophies from it really made sense to me, so I've stood by its definition of 'love' ever ...

    Apr 7, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Digital Art

    *looks around, making sure the coast is clear. Right clicks and saves pictures to computer* These are brilliant, I have to agree with the others that first is better than ...

    Apr 6, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: The World of Photoshop.

    I put it in a spoiler because it's oh so very long, but please read this first. First of all, I don't know if photoshop art goes here, I've never ...

    Apr 5, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: Fairytales From Hell

    The baker pulled his freshly baked product from the oven, but was slightly surprised to see the gingerbread man jump up and shout "Catch me if you ca-" but he ...

    Apr 4, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Answer a question with a question game

    To be americas next overly melodramatic winner of an overly melodramatic drama queen contest?

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Randomosity Re: Fairytales From Hell

    Once upon a time little red riding hood was on her way to visit her grandmother when she heard something in the woods. She reached into her picnic basket and ...

    Apr 3, 2011
  • Randomosity Archive Re: The User Below You ... [2]

    Wow! I live in all three! Oh, wait, no I dont'. TUBM has told exactly 323 lies throughout their life :D

    Apr 3, 2011


There is no greater agony than bearing an untold story inside of you.
— Maya Angelou