Confictura

Let's forget about "have they been here" and ask a new question, "would we want them?'" If they've managed to locate and travel to our World, then it's almost GUARANTEED ...

I spread two tablespoons of tomato paste on my birthday cake, so now I call cake a vegetable... NO. WRONG, INCORRECT! Yeah, Pizza may be made with several different kinds ...

Last time I checked, I was built to have a balanced all around diet. I love my vegetables, I love my bacon, so I eat both. No religious views hinder ...

I found a few things that bothered me. but if my experience says anything, or speaks for itself, than I look a little better. Then, not Than. “I’m captain of ...

I've met Renn, still not sure if that's a good or bad thing. :P She actually introduced me to the site... Still not sure if that's a good or bad ...

YWS... Waitaminute

Do we really need to ask what's painfully obvious to the outside viewer, participant, referee and coaches?

Is it too short or too long? Does it feel as if you were force-fed information? I know the characters aren't quite described or developed. This chapter was meant to ...

Jabber is correct, Research research research. However! Be careful that you don't sound too robotic from the research, remember that most drug addicts are people and therefore have emotions! usually ...

I liked it! Until it ended with little to no explanation. I found that there was more of a Super-hero theme than a magical/wizard-y one. (although that may just be ...

Subtlety, a dangerous tool. However, I think you've used it correctly to create a unique character. I will admit that I did have a feeling of "what? that's it?". Maybe ...

I'm comforted that this is part of a larger story, otherwise I would've had to dock large ammounts of points for throwing together random names and plot elements. I'm definitely ...

For all those NOT a fan of Renn's beautiful word weaving, the story that this poem is attached to can be found

A group of miners break into a system of tunnels, after exploring for a while they come across a skeleton clutching a piece of paper to it's chest. The paper ...

I can't say I like it. I'm an agnostic with atheistic tendencies, and I can't agree with anything that was really said in your poem. I'm a little hurt by ...