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See this writing piece as a chance to improve. It's a nice example of an early writing style that I really think you can refine overall, and just learn from ...

Strong. Simple. Lovely. In my opinion the minimal approach to both structure and wording allows the reader themselves to fills in the gaps, giving the feeling of breathlesness and emptiness ...

The main strength of this poem lies in the rhythm. You have perfect word choice in establishing the pace of the poem. The line "Whose sorrow beaten shells like stones ...

The main strength of this poem lies in the rhythm. You have perfect word choice in establishing the pace of the poem. The line "Whose sorrow beaten shells like stones ...