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Thissen here's a gooden. I just wish it wasin't so short. That and I found myself reading it all at once and too quickly.

where is your poetry? and I swear if you write about: singing shepards along brittle regements, that apple burns alone, alone, dark, alone. simplicity I will be dissapointed. That writing ...

Freeverse doesn't work any which way. It's just short prose with poetic images.

Poor little Ingrid no one found her pretty, not in those bulging eyes or bent teeth teeth that looked pulled by pliers every night for five years straight. That little ...

I enjoyed your poems, especially this line, which offers a clear cut and simple image: Apollo sigh-slipped into her coffin. I do have problems with poems that offer too many ...

I had a few difficulties, namely this portion of your piece: where we can stand linked apart, and I can see the end in your eyes but cannot view the ...

This piece is completly free-verse. I am not trying to put across any distinct message, this is a surreal out of body view of what's going on. I've been writing ...

I couldn't read it all but I have a few comments, not all of which are demonizing. He turned his face to the side to take away the worst, and ...

I wouldn't try to sound 'uber cool' by putting words like percieved and via in your criticisms.

Leave your ego at the door little one, no one is challenging you. I can't stand people that try piss on others to feel better about who they are. I ...

Man you guys are young, what's the deal!?

Joggers float by, arrogant or truly happy but the ones laughing are always in groups and the scent of time closes up behind them Speech shutters to silence, silence to ...

Throughout the far east there are dispersed a slew of religious beliefs. Among them, Hinduism and Buddhism are the most prominent in popularity. The correlations between the two belief systems ...

Why would I pretend to be 19? Am I supposed to be younger? Well, these articles are more like little blogs. I'll probably post one every day. What I am ...

*I hope this ruffles some 'tail-feathers' of the 'conservative', 'elite' of 'agenda' that seeks to bring down the 'liberal traitors'. Bush's approval rating has dropped over 10% since January. The ...