ColeHeart

Yeah, I'm getting it further away from Warriors though...The more I write the further it gets. x3 And I think it should be here because it's not a fan story ...

Good idea. This story has a bit of soul and is original which is awesome. However, I think you need to do alot of work. It's just too boring from ...

Hello! Could you review my story? :) Title or link: Type of piece: Fantasy Rating: PG (For violance.) thanks!

Thanks for the welcomes! :D Hi brittany x3 Yay~ i found it :D but you didnt. . . thank me? D: anyway, i hope curumbasa gets comments/revies soon~ Blah~Hai sistah~ ...

My first story that has made it past one chapter. :) To be exact, it has forty seven pages. Now, in the beginning, it might be kind of boring, but ...

I'm thinking maybe you should have put "Eyes the colour of fish fin" underneath "Colourful eyes" and "Skin the colour of milk" underneath "Colourful skin". It might make it better ...

It's good and original, but something about the why it's written was confusing me...I really don't know why. The ryhming is pretty good, and I do like the meaning to ...

I have never watched the show before, so I don't get half of this poem. It is quite well written. It could have been better...I think...Maybe. xD And aren't poems ...

Hello! My sister just found this site, so I decided to join. I am in the middle of writing a story that I am going to try to publish one ...

This is a very confusing story. There are too many long and confusing words that you would have to search the dictionary to find their meaning. I'd advise using the ...