Colditz

Thanks for the input! I will take into account all the advice you had as far as punctuation and whatnot. I've written plenty of other stuff where the dialouge is ...

How do you guys figure out character personalities The method that works best for me is: I first think of a character that has a single or few particular traits ...

Mother never left the sentry robots unattended to for more than an hour. She knew what the risks were. Even though the robot's censors would trip an alarm if something ...

I like this opening. I have two suggestions. You write: Writhing figures engulfed in a vortex of onyx flashed through time and space but then I get a conflicting sense ...

Hello everyone! I ran across this site while searching for writing resources and groups. Perhaps I will post some of my own works and review some things here and there. ...