ColdZero

Hey guys Thanks for the reviews, it's just a basic preview of what I might be making a story out of. I didn't really go into detail or pay much ...

Hello everybody, this is a rough preview of a story I might write if enough people like it. It's called The Zone, and you'll have to read it to find ...

Thanks guys, I'll keep all your stuff in mind. Better start Chapter Two now :)

This is the sequel to the Wandering Elves! Hey everybody, this is Chapter One of my main Fantasy novel. I'm still unsure of what the permanent name will be, so ...

Mminc, you post stories chapter by chapter in YWS. However each chapter has to be in a different topic.

Oh that's okay, thanks for writing the critique up anyways. Yeah it is going to be the prologue to my other story, which I'm in the process of writing now ...

That amazed me, you really have potential to write a great novel. The plot line so far is gripping, I liked how you drew me in with each line of ...

Hey mminc :) I'm here to give a small review, not anything big, just putting forth my opinions on the whole story etc.. Well, I really enjoyed the concept, the ...

Thanks guys, this is only a brief, rough preview of Chapter One and there is lots of changes to be made still. I'm glad you do like it though, keep ...

Thanks Ranger Hawk. I'll take all of that into mind, I'm writing the Chapter One good copy now :) Also thanks for linking me to the rules of dialouge, I'm ...

Thanks Kanen. Yeah, I wouldn't mind you to crit it later on in the week :)

Hey, and welcome to YWS. What sort of things do you like writing/reading? Personally I'm a real Fantasy Fanatic, but I enjoy all sorts :) PM me if you ever ...

Thanks Izumi. Remeber, this is only a really rough preview of Chapter One. I've still got lots of work to do before I post the actual chapter one :)

Hey guys. This is a preview of Chapter One in my new Fantasy story. It follows the events of the Wandering Elves. Because it's a preview, it's still an extremely ...

Hey Jasmine. The time period, is really undecided at this point in time because I haven't had time to create all that for Elorenn just yet. Re guarding Amaril, Galaril ...