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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Reaper's Song #1

    1) Yes this is a good start. The mystery draws the reader in nicely. 2) Descriptions. The violin could use some more description as it seems to be important. The ...

    Oct 31, 2008


Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins