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Re: Reaper's Song #1
1) Yes this is a good start. The mystery draws the reader in nicely. 2) Descriptions. The violin could use some more description as it seems to be important. The ...
Oct 31, 2008 -
Re: Escape from the Academy, Part 1
Really, it is a good start. The only problem (which can easily be corrected) is the descriptions. Just add a couple more.
Oct 31, 2008 -
Re: Welcome New Members!
Ok, so I guess I'm a newbie and I post here. Well... here I am. I enjoy reading and writing. (obviously) My favorite genres are fantasy and Sci-Fi. Wow this ...
Oct 31, 2008