Cobra

This is quite good for your first story, but you need to explain this more. You haven't given us much information about the story, or why the main character is ...

This is a good piece! Brian seems mysteriously sinister but that could just be a fluke. You're describing life on the island fairly well but this doesn't have all that ...

Banned for living in Nowheresville.

Very well, I'm in.

pfft.

Banned for being optimistic

Paramore? We need you to post.

When you're a genius, it isn't hard to figure out Chirantha's psychology(Hah! I know how you think!) Your surname is...Saradoky! (guess) My first name begins with J and has five ...

No way! I love all three! I have wild mice in the house, a pet rat and several spiders in my house. (Also, bats occasionally fly into the house and ...

Banned for asking a question as your country!

I'm not Scott, Matthew.

Banned for not saying they're a hypocrite, which is much simpler than saying banned for banning someone who's a novelist when you're also a novelist!

7/10. I say again, more substance.

8/10.

Hell yeah, dude! TPBM has a pet dog who is scared of cats.