Cobra

Ok thanks for the advice. I was planning on keeping Cobra's appearance quiet until you find out what's strange about him but I will probably work on Hwakshire and the ...

This is quite a good story, quite funny. But where exactly are you going to go with this? Is it a murder mystery? If so, good. I like murder mysteries. ...

yeah you need to develop your character more. We don't even know their name. Also, explaining the basis for your story would improve it a lot e.g Why are humans ...

This is a crazy play. Why would people kill each other for no reason? Still, not to hard to act out and it's short.

oookaaay. This play is nuts. It doesn't make any sense at all. But well done for trying.

Top Secret Cobra: Half Human (Please comment on this-I need to know what people think about it. Thanks.) Cobra's back pressed against a hard brick wall. He held his breath, ...