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  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: I'm trying to use my head, I swear

    This was so interesting! I really liked the ending. The only part I din't understnad was the connection between "Her laundry piled" and the next sentence, "she had a monster ...

    Mar 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Chapter 1

    I'm so sorry for the message being sent so many times! I don't know why that happened or how to delete it. Sorry! Also, just so you know - I'm ...

    Mar 23, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Chapter 1

    Hi! It was really interesting! I'm really curious what's going to happen from now on. I don't know a lot, but here are some thoughts: In the beginning, the word ...

    Mar 23, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Chapter 1

    Hi! It was really interesting! I'm really curious what's going to happen from now on. I don't know a lot, but here are some thoughts: In the beginning, the word ...

    Mar 23, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Chapter 1

    Hi! It was really interesting! I'm really curious what's going to happen from now on. I don't know a lot, but here are some thoughts: In the beginning, the word ...

    Mar 23, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Serendipity - chapter 1

    Thank you so much for your review!!! I'm really glad you enjoyed it so far!

    Mar 23, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Serendipity - chapter 1

    Thank you for your thorough review!! I didn't notice about the sentence structure. That's very interesting! I'll make sure to pay attention to that in the next chapters. Thank you!

    Mar 23, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Serendipity - chapter 1

    Thank you!! I'm really glad you liked it! You're right - I had a few typos in there! I'll fix them up :) Thanks!!

    Mar 23, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Serendipity - chapter 1

    Thank you very much!! You're right, I can't believe I missed those! I'm really very thankful for this review.

    Mar 23, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Serendipity - chapter 1

    Thank you so much!! I really appreciate it!

    Mar 23, 2020


One believes things because one has been conditioned to believe them.
— Aldous Huxley, Brave New World