Cloudthing

Hi! All in all I thought this was really cute! I like the relationship between the two girls, I thought it was very believable. You do have a slight tendency ...

Wow!!! I thought this was really powerful. I also really liked the fact that it didn't have any specific structure - it made it feel more personal and honest. I ...

This was so interesting! I really liked the ending. The only part I din't understnad was the connection between "Her laundry piled" and the next sentence, "she had a monster ...

Hi! It was really interesting! I'm really curious what's going to happen from now on. I don't know a lot, but here are some thoughts: In the beginning, the word ...

I really like this! I thought it was really interesting. The first paragraph was a bit weird because I thought Ash was a younger sibling or something from the way ...