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Oh-- sorry Jigs. I copy and paste the story into my reply box when I review, and maybe I accidentally hit a backspace somewhere. Blah. Ignore that comment.

I thought of another book in a conversation with someone: Dancing with an Alien by Mary Logue. An alien goes to school and tells everyone he's Romanian. Girl falls in ...

Ky -- They walked through the long grass, all shook up by the wind, threshing around them with wild, contemptible movements, [s]like damned souls[/s]. Out of all the similes in ...

Hunter S Thompson = fun I'm surprised so many very young people are listing classic literature. Contemporary books are fun too! You don't want to miss out on those.

Well, I do think you took it too far in the way that in some places you created a tone I'm pretty sure you didn't really didn't want the reader ...

Emily. I adore Wuthering Heights.

By any chance, does that Wicked (Witch and Chance), contained a storyline where the main character's entire family dies in a rafting accident in the first chapter?

It's hard to pick the best. I'm just going to shout "anything by Kurt Vonnegut" and run away.

Since everyone has forgotten, as the founder of this popular thread I feel I should say that in my initial post for this I said Do Not Mention Twilight or ...

Connie! It did not take Creep one day to heal his wounds. Well - that's obvious! ^^ I think it would be best to not keep such an obvious sentence. ...

You don't give proper evidence to your points, considering this is a piece of writing. Since these comments are really a debate and not a critique, if you wish to ...

Just because you don't think it's art, does not in any way mean it is in fact not art. Again, subjective. I might as well be yelling at a wall, ...

Hey staples! This snagged my attention, and now I just have to review it! As is commonly accepted among figures of little importance, really weird things that end with you ...

Hey staples! This snagged my attention, and now I just have to review it! As is commonly accepted among figures of little importance, really weird things that end with you ...

Epic win! May the Instructors flood YWS and unleash review-y havoc. Nate: I’ve got to leave now. Unlike you all, I have a life. I question this statement. Awesome, Connie. ...