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Re: Holy Rolling (5)
Ky! I like how I'm on top of the reviews now. :) --- The nose of the plow couldn't push through the earth more than an inch. It was all ...
Mar 8, 2009 -
Re: Holy Rolling (4)
KY! This is me catching up with your postings, for once! I'm very proud of myself for being on the ball. I'm not sure if this is considered me giving ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: '...and Her People' pt1
Hey Bio! Remember me from the Welcome forums? :lol: Now here I am to give you your first purple review (I think). Science fiction tends to not get as many ...
Mar 6, 2009 -
Re: Holy Rolling (3)
Hey Ky! I want to be considered part of your fan club too. :( I'm wondering where the names went right now. Before you had Franklin and Charlotte in bold ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: The House of the Bleeding Sun (1)
Angie! *tackle* I get to review one of your stories! This makes me happy. :) Heat was everywhere. It's strange to think of heat being at a place (i.e., everywhere). ...
Mar 5, 2009 -
Re: Bailey, one.
Hey Loosey Goosey! A once intoxicating cocktail of scent that Bailey [s]has[/s] learned to associate with production possibility curves and tax and demand factors had been aired out and replaced. ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Holy Rolling (2)
Kylan! One of these days I'm going to get to one of your pieces first and then I'm going to have so much to say. Until then, I agree with ...
Mar 4, 2009 -
Re: Holy Rolling (1)
Ky! Phew... I'm finally here. I'm sorry it took so long. :( The heat blistered the ground until the dirt dried up and you could crumble in between your fingers, ...
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: Watermelon Rinds
Hey Evi! I feel the need to review this, because you're so awesome. :) The flower was drenched in teardrops. Though everything else comes across as original in this storyline, ...
Mar 3, 2009 -
Re: Freeman Falls
Hey Jesse-- They flew proud amongst each other with dignity, and pride. Get rid of that comma there, it just sort of clogs up your sentence and isn't necessary. "each ...
Feb 23, 2009 -
Re: Ambulans Noctis: Chapter 1
Hey Starleene! Your name is adorable. BAM! The door slammed against its hinges, crashing into the wall and almost knocking my picture frame off its perch on the shelf, again. ...
Feb 10, 2009 -
Re: I'm Drinking my Last Hurricane
Hey Hannah-Banana! I'm drinking my last hurricane, hoping this one will melt my brain. Watch the whores walk by in the summer heat with the short, short shorts that I'd ...
Feb 8, 2009 -
Re: I'm Drinking My Last Hurricane
Hey Mars-Bars! This poem is lyrical, almost like it should be a song. I like the excited, wild nature of the poem. There's one thing I really don't like though, ...
Feb 8, 2009 -
Re: Among the Infidels (1)
SAM! You've posted something! You're amazing! I rushed to this when I saw it. ^_^ Your opening line is awesome and fills me with interest. I don't experience this enough, ...
Feb 5, 2009 -
Re: The Exorcism of Aphrodite
Kylan -- What what what can I say about this? On first impression, your writing dazzles. On second impression, your writing dazzles. I've said it so many times, but you ...
Feb 4, 2009
