Clay

Hi, now as older brother, this made me think about how I act with my sister. This piece made me feel bad and love my sister that much more :). ...

Hi there! My reviews arent the best but I'll do it anyway. First I thought the plot was interesting and what happened to Ali, Jessica, and Kylia was completely different ...

HIO TOE!!! Great poem I'll try to review (I'm useless when I do it but hey ho!) I really like Memories remembered, ambitions dreamt, Schemes planned, and proposals given, Problems ...

Wow, at first it took me a second to get used to your writing style, (I'm not long new, so I not that good at reviewing) but the story was ...

Yay! you posted it! You already know my review, its an a great start and makes me want to read more, even tho you dont like writing in first person ...

Its was really interesting to read, my only problem was at some parts I got a bit lost at to what was happening but thats probly me just being tried ...

Well for someone whos half asleep, you wrote amazing poem, it was deepessing but there was a lot emotion in. I'm not that good at reviewing and this my first ...