Cjean

my name is CJ not GJ... and thanks for your critique.

never letting go; they would find it sick; throw you in jail and me in some boarding school with nuns or whatever they'd do. but i lay here; you're sleeping. ...

i like the personification in this, and i especially like the 5th stanza. : ) loves itt;;

i like the rhyme, and yea you did need some editing. but i hate grammar and punctuation because to me poetry isn't about putting damn commas and semi colons in ...

imma fishie.

wow; i love this. i'm not even a religious person too much but this was touching. i think it was put together very nicely and i love the rhyme, not ...

thank you stolenhearts! i didn't know i had to review 2 pieces before submitting one, i'll do that from now on. and thank you adrian, thats my favorite name. but ...

...i never said i was weird.

i found you in your attic looking through the old boxes of photos dust floating in a single crack of sunlight "this place reeks..." i broke the silence "it's the ...

i'm sure we all can agree that those with creative minds are dreamers, for the most part. when i was younger i analyzed the shit out of the simplest things, ...