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Re: Luna 7
Hello, my name is Cirque and I'll be your reviewer for today. On an overall, this was very interesting and cleverly thought out. “Where did you get this?” h is ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Linger On Your Pale Blue Eyes
Welcome to YWS! As I haven't seen you are much, I'm taking it that you're new or I just don't look for people. My name is Cirque and I'll be ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Cloud and Keke-Renegade children-proposal-part 1
Hello, my name is Cirque but my Mum named me Alice; so you can choose what name to call me. I feel kind of special as the main characters name ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: A Proper Introduction- Zuko & Momo
Hello, my name is Cirque and I'll be your reviewer for today. What I found as I read through your story is that your explanation was phenomenal. You didn't bog ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Open Roads *Casey Johnson*
I don't really know if I can review this, though I'll place my opinion on your character to make it strong and stuff. I've seen these kind of things in ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Lightning Platoon 106 ch. 1 pt2
I read your title wrong to think that this was your 106th chapter. I was all like; WHAT!!! But now I see, it's platoon 106. :lol: Anyway, I'm going to ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: After the Shadow Children Part 2
Hello, my name is Cirque and I'm going to be your reviewer for today. I'm going into a different kind of reviewing really just try out this style. It's not ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: Wolf Creek: The Quest Chapter One
This may by a rather short review as you haven't written much and grammar and spelling are good that there weren't to many mistakes to pick up on but a ...
Jul 12, 2010 -
Re: The Red Herrin'-Chapter 1
Hello, I'm Cirque or Alice (anyone is fine) and I'm here to review your work today. I just want to point out that both the title and appearance are appropriate ...
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: Blue Eyes Don't Lie (4)
The title to this is very interesting. It's the particular reason I chose to review this. What I don't like about it upon appearance though is its clutterdiness (is that ...
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: Can You See Me? (Chapter Seven ~ Part One)
Not really much to pick up on. I guess that is why you're a featured member then. :lol: As you said on the review page, I was 'lil confused but ...
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: Making it all ALONE- Chapter One
No, this is a very good start to a story. I'm taking that you're new , :D like me! I'm Alice, well actually Cirque and as promised I'm here to ...
Jul 11, 2010 -
Re: A Halted Heart, Prologue
Hell, I'm Cirque and I'm going to be your review today. I find that this is to descriptive for a young girl of ten. Though, she does have some young ...
Jul 5, 2010 -
Re: Sky'Breaker
As this is kind of long, I'm going to review the prologue and hopefully come back for part one. *Crosses fingers* I'm rather busy today, so yeah, that's why I ...
Jul 5, 2010 -
Re: "Eveline UPDATE" 7/2/10
Hello, my name is Cirque and I'm going to be your reviewer for today. I must mention that this is a really good story. I really enjoyed reading through it ...
Jul 4, 2010
