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Hi meg :) Okay here is the promised review - I'm sorry about how late it is! I'll get straight into it :) I'll get the more technical things out ...

Hello there :) Okay so, right now this poem seems a little all over the place - but by no means bad! You say you're not completely sure what your ...

Hi alfred :) I'm not really very good with critiquing poetry I just like to read it so bear that in mind when you read this! I liked most of ...

Hi Dudette! Okay, firstly this is definitely not awful! :) I actually really did like it a lot. I loved that it was about a brother and sister and not ...

Hi ire :) I see you're also new to the site, how are you finding it so far? As you put in the title I can see that this must ...