Cielo

I think I'm addicted to orange juice. No, really, I'm not kidding. I drank 3 litre cartons in one day once, and I went to stay with a friend for ...

Hi meg :) Okay here is the promised review - I'm sorry about how late it is! I'll get straight into it :) I'll get the more technical things out ...

Hello there :) Okay so, right now this poem seems a little all over the place - but by no means bad! You say you're not completely sure what your ...

Hi alfred :) I'm not really very good with critiquing poetry I just like to read it so bear that in mind when you read this! I liked most of ...

Hello again ire! :) I just critiqued some writing of youre which you posted - was that something which you began to write and lost interest in? If it was ...

Hi Dudette! Okay, firstly this is definitely not awful! :) I actually really did like it a lot. I loved that it was about a brother and sister and not ...

Hi ire :) I see you're also new to the site, how are you finding it so far? As you put in the title I can see that this must ...

Hi everyone :D Snoink (very cool name!), where you live sounds amazing! America really sounds absolutely beautiful, especially all the national parks and such. A friend of mine went on ...

Hi jasminebells (pretty name) :) Haha revision is I think what people call 'studying' in America? I'm doing my final exams for the year at the moment. It's great fun ...

Hello :) I'm Cielo, as I guess you can see. I am 19, just finishing my first year of University, and browsing YWS is quite possibly the best form of ...