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  • Short Story » Romantic, Satire
    Re: Match made in Heaven

    Hello Ailah! I loved reading this! It was super interesting throughout, and I like what it says about society. Fans will believe everything they want? What is on TV is ...

    Dec 23, 2020

  • Short Story » Health, General
    Re: Blurs

    Hello, campbellrc22! This is so wonderfully written and expressive. I really liked your descriptions. I don't really have much to say because this feels very real and personal. I do ...

    Dec 21, 2020

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: I don't remember!!!

    Hi, ImaginativeAlice! I did enjoy reading this! Such a cool concept, but I wonder if forgetting everything might be a good thing too? Then, she wouldn't be weighed down by ...

    Dec 21, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense
    Re: Chapter 1 (Volume One) Prince of Heaven and Hell

    Hello, NoobWriterIsHere! I'm assuming that this is the first chapter because if it isn't, I haven't read the other chapters. Can I just say that I really like the plot ...

    Sep 20, 2020

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Fly By Night

    Hello IamI! This was a bit long for my short attention span, but I still really enjoyed the concept. It reminded me of memories at the airport late at night ...

    Aug 14, 2020

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: Old high school projects autumn mash-up

    Hi, Doomrats! Welcome to YWS! I would say that WaterSpout covered mostly everything I have to say. This was a very interesting piece, and it leaves many questions. I share ...

    Aug 7, 2020

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction
    Re: The Mal (Ch. 1) (Teaser)

    Hi, Rosewood! I liked this chapter a lot, a lot! It was super interesting, and it covers everything I could ask for in the first chapter. The descriptions set the ...

    Aug 6, 2020

  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic
    Re: What Am I?

    Hi, silverquill! What an impactful poem! I absolutely loved reading this because I deeply identified with it in some way (fellow mess and fangirl). Conversely, I liked reading it because ...

    Jun 25, 2020

  • Other » General, General
    Re: [deleted]

    Hello, BlackThorne! This was such a cool poem! I'm not very good at reviewing or writing poetry, but I'll give you my thoughts on "Chrysalis." First off, I really liked ...

    Mar 27, 2020

  • Short Story » General, General
    Re: The Script

    Hello, LewisPencastle2! I really liked reading this; it definitely kept my attention throughout the story. I thought the premise of the story was really interesting and left a lot of ...

    Mar 27, 2020

  • Poetry » Spiritual, Theatre
    Re: Thinking is Dangerous

    Hello, Durban Poison! I'm not particularly good at reviewing poetry, but I'll give it a try. I really liked the whole concept of this poem, and I connected with it ...

    Oct 27, 2019

  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Teen Fiction
    Re: 01. The Invisible Kid

    Hi, WinnyWriter! I loved reading this! It has a very intriguing plot, and it lays a sturdy foundation for the following chapters. Your introduction was quite the hook, and the ...

    Oct 13, 2019

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: The Lost Dragon 18.1

    Hello, soundofmind! I hope you don't mind that I'm writing this review even though I haven't read the other chapters. Although I didn't quite know what was going on, I ...

    Sep 29, 2019

  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic
    Re: Childhood-Short Story?

    Hi, ToxicAnglerFish! This was a pithy and pensive short story that I truly enjoyed reading. Your descriptions and language are lovely. I absolutely love your take on the prompt: it ...

    Sep 20, 2019

  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction
    Re: Chapter Two- Olivia Carter

    Hi, starryknightt! Yes! Chapter 2 is out, and we get Olivia's point of view! This was a very enjoyable read, and you do a wonderful job formatting the scenes. The ...

    Sep 8, 2019

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