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  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: The Earth Was Rent And Torn

    I loved the story. Post nuclear war germany and the diease taht follows. I liked how you described the peace to be worse than the war itself and that you ...

    May 10, 2008
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: In war, victory is a vision

    I loved the poem. I'm sorry I can't gramaitcally crit but here are my thoughts and opinions. Anything about soldiers or warfare always seems to grab my attention. It sounds ...

    May 10, 2008
  • Archive Re: Republic Commando

    Blu: Blue watched as Zall began his walk down the Long white hallway. It was like thay had never left Kamino. Blu decided that he wanted to talk to his ...

    May 10, 2008
  • Archive Re: The Crusier "Worst Nightmare" (HALO storybook!)

    I need some people to join. If you have read the Halo books you could adapt to this SB very easily!

    May 10, 2008
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [2]

    6/10 It reminds me of Poke'mon and now I have to forget about them again. lol

    May 9, 2008
  • Lounge, The Re: Burma Death Toll Could Reach 500,000

    If the government continues to refuse to let in aid, there will be a slight of power in their country. Someone will stand up and rally the survivors to over ...

    May 9, 2008
  • Archive Re: Republic Commando

    Currently the clones and the Jedi are headed to Geonosis for their first battle. The Baptism By Fire type of thing. Weed out the weak NCPs. Everyone else is either ...

    May 8, 2008
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: First Kiss

    It was short and highlty descriptive. I like how you make it easy for the reader to visualize the characters, thier actions, and the setting they were in. The kiss ...

    May 8, 2008
  • Fiction Discussion Re: What are you reading at the moment?

    I'm just about to finish the second Legacy Of the Force book Betrayal. Then its on to the third!

    May 8, 2008
  • Writing Activities Re: Title Feedback

    I would have to guess a romance that has an important scene near the ocean. When the World Stops Spinning

    May 6, 2008
  • Randomosity Re: Boring Avatar Club

    I had the halo Avitar of Cortana screaming but its this. I just recently stopped using the first one

    May 5, 2008
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Signature Above You [2]

    6/10 It doesn't appeal as much to me as your Avitar did.

    May 5, 2008
  • Randomosity Archive Re: Rate the Avatar Above You! [2]

    9/10 I never thought about those figures being compared.

    May 5, 2008
  • Archive Re: Pirate

    Julios took the moaning as a sign that she was enjoying it as much as he was, so he stepped it it a bit and began moving his hands all ...

    May 5, 2008
  • Archive Re: Pirate

    Julios had never done anything past kissing in his entire life until now. He moved his head for a better angle to start kissing down Sydney's chest.

    May 5, 2008


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