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I knew she wouldn't like the coment so I improvised "No, no. Its more we are lucky to have each other." I replied.

Chapter 1: A feeling of Despair “This is an emergency broadcast bulletin!” The automated system yelped as the speaker was whipped away by the two hundred plus mile per hour ...

"Good afternoon my humble guests. Welcome abourd our ship." gestures to Sydney "This is my bride to be" he takes her hand and kisses it once again flashing a smile ...

"So, how long until we roll out the welcome mat Sydney?" attempting to ask when he could spring the trap.

I love war stories and tragedies. I love tragic war stories the most. This reminded me of Blackhawk Down. Very well writen and the need for revenge at the end ...

The only thing you need is a name to go with the storyline. Like usual I can't find any grammer errorrs or punctuation so I'm not much help there sorry. ...

Is it too late to make a second character. Just wondering

Danny: A grenade landed at his feet, the two other rangers he was with froze. Danny kicked the grenade roughly back to where it had come from and after a ...

"You are the captain."Julois replies. "Tea anyone." He then reaches over and takes her hand kissing her hand and then releasing it. "A little kindness not many pirates show." He ...

Julios: Julios nodded in agreement not quite being able to speak. He followed her to her quarters and began rumaging for something to wear for a raid. "Wait... Captain Sydney, ...

Julios: "Ah, what is it now. Well it gives me an excuse to see the captain." Julios mumbled. He climbed the ladder as quickly as possible and ran through the ...

Julios: julios was walking back down to the leak to see what else he could do with it. He entered the cannons room and slid down the ladder to the ...

I sort of got eh impression at the beginingthat the boy was the MC. I didn't see any grammer errors that havent already been mentioned. I did like the atmoshpere ...

Julios: Julios rushes to the main deck to find the captain. His jet black hair a total wet mess. "Miss Sydney," he shouts, "we may have a bi't of a ...

Prologue Part 2: The Boy With All the Theories March 10, 1989, the anniversary of the discovery, a boy was born in Dewey Oklahoma. His name was Alexander. He went ...