ChummyJinx

Thank you so much for the review. I need to cut out a bit of the repetitions. For you, it's the semi-colons. For another reviewer, it's the names. Etc. I'll ...

Thank you for the review. I agree, I think I might be rambling a bit in this chapter about the setting. Another reviewer suggested I make the entire chapter a ...

Thanks so much for the review! Yeah, I've been arranging and rearranging and pulling my hair out over the flashback vs. present-day parts. I think I will make the first ...