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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Teen Fiction Re: Where Monsters Kneel

    Excellent hook, caught my attention immediately. The tone has a very dark, suspenseful feel, and the way the story is formatted adds to this. I'm not really sure how those ...

    Mar 22
  • Other » General, Supernatural Re: 3 AM

    This is very spooky and I like the spooky. The point of view works well for the story. The format really helps the vibe. Maybe could use even more concerning ...

    Mar 22


I went to confront noisy neighbours, only to find the windows dark, stuck with two notes. The ghost, too, had "gone fishing". Something still whistled.
— Liminality