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Re: Coexistence
Chapter One I kicked at the loose gravel on the ground, knocking it over the edge of the curb to pitfall to the black sea of turf below. The soft ...
Dec 23, 2010 -
Re: Aloha!
Hey Tabby! and Tonya! Evergreen is really great (minus being in Washington, where it rains all the time and vampires don't actually exist haha). But I actually did just happen ...
Dec 23, 2010 -
Re: Little White Lies (working title)
A bit of background: This is a bit from a piece I have worked on off and on for a while. It’s somewhat based off of the events in the ...
Dec 18, 2010 -
Re: To Make the Earth Smile
Hello dear, I saw you had no reviews and I simply adore being the first reviewer so here goes! So I read your poem twice. The first time I finished ...
Dec 18, 2010 -
Re: Aloha!
Haha funny you should bring Celtic music up. My mom is completely obsessed! She absolutely loves anything and everything Celtic. She actually drew a tatto they we hope to get ...
Dec 18, 2010 -
Re: Aloha!
Haha funny you should bring Celtic music up. My mom is completely obsessed! She absolutely loves anything and everything Celtic. She actually drew a tatto they we hope to get ...
Dec 18, 2010 -
Re: Aloha!
Haha funny you should bring Celtic music up. My mom is completely obsessed! She absolutely loves anything and everything Celtic. She actually drew a tatto they we hope to get ...
Dec 18, 2010 -
Re: My Sunrise Gallery
Hey Vitamin! I love the pictures. We can only see the first two though :( I prefer the second one to the first, I think just because the colors look ...
Dec 18, 2010 -
Re: Mother of the Savior: A Monologue
Wowzers Princess! Two nit picks really quick! 1. "This time I was walking down an empty street in city I'd never seen before." I think you meant "in a city" ...
Dec 18, 2010 -
Re: Without Words Screenplay
Hello MadHatter! I absolutely love screenplays! I work on my own all the time but had never thought of a no words one, that's a really cool prompt to work ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: An Almost Lover
Hey Joanne, I hate to be the meanie but I had a problem with this peice. It felt a litte confusing at first, the more I read the more I ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Mr. Darcy
Hellooooo Luna! How are you? I read your poem and I like it. There weren't any gramatical errors I caught off gaurd. The parts that don't seem to work for ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Aloha!
Don't feel unnecessary! Nobody is ever unnecessary! Yes I was actually scared out of my wits, my mom had to practically drag me to the movie theater! But once I ...
Dec 17, 2010 -
Re: Aloha!
Hello chickens! I have parused and feel quite confident that I know all there is to know about the way of the Young Writers Society. I know how to navigate ...
Dec 17, 2010
