Christianne_015

I loved it. Very amusing. suggestion though; use 'speech marks' That's exactly what I was going to say! Well, I thought that maybe, just maybe , the beginning was just ...

*cough* (I honestly did in an "Oh, my God─I can't believe it" way) That was hilarious. Seriously. You're very funny.

I'm with Griffinkeeper. It was mostly a wall of dialogue. I've heard people say--and I agree with them--that a story should be made up more of descriptions, than dialogue. If ...

It was only mid-evening but already the sun had gone to sleep and the night sky had thrown a shroud of darkness over the scene. It seems like a run-on ...

I can't believe that you're a seven-year-old. There's like no spelling mistakes whatsoever, no punctuation mistakes-- nothing . Did you get help with writing it out or what? I personally ...

My favorite part was near the end, where her ex comes over and asks if she's okay. I also like the part where the people in Kate's head are all ...

I thought the story was pretty good, but there were a couple things I didn't like. One: The story was too fast-paced for me and seemed to skip around a ...