ChristianAlexander

Hey! My name is Chris. I'm new here too. I'm just starting out and trying to learn how everything works. I still haven't gotten everything down quite yet but I'm ...

Hey Chris! Well, thanks for the review. I see you're growing comfortable around here! And yes, pasta is awesome! *cyber fives* See y'around! ~Lava Haha. Thank you so much for ...

Have you ever read East of Eden by Steinbeck? It has been one of my favorite books, but I kind of don't remember it, so I'm re-reading it. I think ...

Hey! I'm Chris. I really like this poem. I read it about five times and each time I liked it more. You stay on topic and I like the rhymthm. ...

Hey, man! :smt003 I am your reviewer for today! 1. You should pay attention to punctuation. Even the simple stuff like, capitalizing, apostrophes, and periods/commas. Even if you use them ...

Hey Sura! :smt003 First off, I think this poem is beautifully constructed in terms of prose and structure. You use phrases like, "tundra's kiss," "...cascades abound," and "blood and hound," ...

Hey! I really enjoyed the poem. It had a reserved and eerie feeling to it. I like the way you use one word sentences. It gives an emphasis and strength ...

Hey :D The topic of the poem is a good topic. I think the poem itself is a little awkward to read. I read it four times to make sure ...

Heyyy! This style of writing is very interesting. Watch the tenses in your story. Keep it consistent. Other than that I like your writing. It's clear and understandable. The style ...

Hey! :smt003 First off, I would like to say I do not correct grammar. I am awful at it. haha Secondly, I enjoyed reading the story. You have an excellent ...

Hello! I would like to let you know that I am not a specialist in grammar so none of my reply messages will contain it, unless the matter is trivial. ...

Hey! =D I thought this short story was pretty good. You gave well constructed description and a clear analysis of your characters. The dialogue was realistic and believable as well. ...

“When is she getting here? We’ve been waiting for twenty minutes.” A teenage boy sat in a wooden chair with his arms crossed tightly. He tapped his foot and often ...

Ahhh, cool! I do mostly a combination of science fiction and fantasy, and realistic fiction. Awesome! I'm excited to read some of your material. :D

Demeter, I really like this selection of haikus. I don't usually read haikus but this is great. You have a skill with description that isn't conventional and it definitely helps ...