ChristianAlexander

Wow. That's amazing. You're very talented. You could definitely be a cartoonist with skyscrapers like that. Excellent drawings, man. Post some more up soon! Much Love, Chris :smt003

Wow! This is excellent. I love art but I could never draw or anything like that. I'm more of a tracer. haha. :smt005 This is awesome though! I like the ...

I disagree with Winie but agree with Perdido. It's a good story and an interesting topic but there is a lack of specific detail that would draw the reader in. ...

In the world we are in I am a faithful citizen. I walk the dim lit streets Where the prostitutes creep. * Where the pot heads traffic, But at least ...

Hey, man! I read your poem three times and I really liked it for the most part. The concept is interesting. I like that it stays consistent and follows the ...

The poem is awfully repetitive. I have an idea maybe you would like. My brother is, who is 21, is writing his first novel. In one of the scenes in ...

Hello xxKittyKatxx! I will be your reviewer today. Even though other people might not like the color change, I like the pink font. haha. Your poem is pretty good in ...

Hey! My name is Chris...umm...or..Christian if you would like. I will be your reviewer for today! :smt003 Ok, buddy: I would like to tell you that I like your metaphors. ...

Hey R.U.! Welcome to YWS! I am new here also but everyone is amazingly nice! They made me feel comfortable early on. I understand your feeling of intimidation. It's ok, ...

Hey! I thank you both so much for reviewing my poem! @LastPaladin Thank you so much for the review. I do agree about the rhythm. That is a recurring problem ...

I can't figure out how to put a space for splitting up stanzas so I decided to put an asterisk instead. It is all one poem though. My beating heart, ...

Hey!! :smt003 Great photos! London looks amazing. I would love to go there one day. I'm a huge Arsenal supporter if that means anything to you. Hahah. I like the ...

Silken birds in crystal trees sway back and forth in waxen breeze preserved with trace of antique rain. Excellent imagery! I love the adjectives you use here. Pale blue curtains ...

Hey, Music! :smt003 My name is Chris. I love writing realistic fiction and I have a short story that I would love to get reviewed. If you could review it ...

Hey! :smt003 I enjoyed reading this poem. I thought it was really well written and it definitely stood out from the other poems I have been reading. The style that ...