Chosenofair

Remember when we used to laugh? To roll on the ground and stare at the sky? Remember when it was just the two of us? When nothing came between us? ...

Ok, speaking as one who has written poetry for a while, I'd say this is a good start. I think you say "I'm sorry" a bit much. it would be ...

The poem wasn't bad. It had a lot of imagery, and that was nice, but you should vary your word choice a bit more. The word "eye(s)" appeared three times ...

Ok, I wrote this for a character in my novel, Matt, to sing(he's in a band). Here's the story behind it: he started writing it for his girlfriend, then switched ...

whoa ah.... this is well..... long.... hmm..... it's only eight pages on my computer. i've written much much longer.

It was the eve of Finals, the only part of a tournament that ever really mattered. Maiora, daughter of Sugil and Draiko, stared out her window and sighed. What is ...