Chosenofair

I suppose it would be the cliché thing to say that she smiled like the sun. That she lit up every room she walked into, and that her eyes shone ...

Hi there! Let me start by saying welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here. It's really a great resource for any budding writer, and no matter what people ...

I got a request for what the prompt was. It was actually an assignment to interpret Hermia's dream from A Midsummer Night's Dream, and then one of our own dreams. ...

It's very neatly done. The colors blend wonderfully, though I think the font would be better if it were black. The white just sort of fades into the color. It's ...

Just wondering why this is here... It is a bit odd. Like half of a conversation.

The old man stopped and sighed, laying aside his pen to stretch. The last words he had written glared up at him like a slighted whore, and it made him ...

The overall idea of the poem is a strong one, but after a couple of readings, it tends to become a bit cliche. It could be any two sisters torn ...

I agree with much of what lilymoore said about this. The "Police-y lady" does seem a little silly after a while, not to mention that fact that this situation even ...

When flowers laugh and souls die Clouds gambol across November sky The scolding air harsh against a face While fingers and hands struggle to keep pace Wandering leaves never find ...

Let me just start off by saying that I am no artist. I can draw a mean stick figure, and that's about it. That doesn't mean that I don't know ...

It kind've reminded me of the movie "Cherry 2000". They're robots used for taking care of the house, and sometimes even sex. Your signature was what reminded me of that, ...

Oh, that actually is the title. And all the stuff I talked about is in my short story that is posted in this forum. The novel I'm writing is a ...

Like everyone said, Nick seems to be a cookie-cutter character. The use of dialogue was great, and seemed to help with moving along the story, if I knew what the ...

Prologue: I wonder how I am supposed to tell you of this. I wonder why I should tell you of this. I’m not proud of it. I never wanted something ...

Most everything was covered in the previous reviews, but I have to point out a couple things they missed: "There was circles under her eyes" should be "There were circles ...