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Re: The Sharing In Power
Ryan ran to the door and saw the same old lady wearing the same blue dress and the same white necklace . comma “Mrs. Heckers!” (break for next line) “Oh ...
Sep 1, 2011 -
Re: Angel Chapter 1
Hey! Sorry forgot to mention this before, but here it is- You don't have to break the chapter in each different scene 'cause it's a third person account and that ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Take A Chance- 14
Hey! Post the next chapter. FAST!!!!!!!!
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: Run Away
Well, it's her father and glad you liked it....
May 31, 2011 -
Re: fading footsteps
THANKS A LOT, GUYS! YOU CAN'T IMAGINE MY SURPRISE THAT MY FIRST POEM RECEIVED SUCH GOOD REVIEWS. IT FEELS REALLY GREAT AND THANKS SO MUCH FOR TAKING OUT YOUR PRECIOUS ...
Apr 26, 2011 -
Re: New Beginning...
First of all, thanks a lot guys for reviewing my work and thanks for all the suggestions, i will surely take them into consideration. I'm very sure that all your ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: 0
a real beautiful story, you should publish it, it was one of the best story i've read in a long time....... thankxxx a lot for treating me with it........
Mar 24, 2011
