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ChocolateMoonLight

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Sharing In Power

    Ryan ran to the door and saw the same old lady wearing the same blue dress and the same white necklace . comma “Mrs. Heckers!” (break for next line) “Oh ...

    Sep 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Angel Chapter 1

    Hey! Sorry forgot to mention this before, but here it is- You don't have to break the chapter in each different scene 'cause it's a third person account and that ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Take A Chance- 14

    Hey! Post the next chapter. FAST!!!!!!!!

    Jul 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Run Away

    Well, it's her father and glad you liked it....

    May 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: fading footsteps

    THANKS A LOT, GUYS! YOU CAN'T IMAGINE MY SURPRISE THAT MY FIRST POEM RECEIVED SUCH GOOD REVIEWS. IT FEELS REALLY GREAT AND THANKS SO MUCH FOR TAKING OUT YOUR PRECIOUS ...

    Apr 26, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: New Beginning...

    First of all, thanks a lot guys for reviewing my work and thanks for all the suggestions, i will surely take them into consideration. I'm very sure that all your ...

    Apr 1, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: 0

    a real beautiful story, you should publish it, it was one of the best story i've read in a long time....... thankxxx a lot for treating me with it........

    Mar 24, 2011


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings