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ChocolateMoonLight

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Sharing In Power

    Ryan ran to the door and saw the same old lady wearing the same blue dress and the same white necklace . comma “Mrs. Heckers!” (break for next line) “Oh ...

    Sep 1, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Angel Chapter 1

    Hey! Sorry forgot to mention this before, but here it is- You don't have to break the chapter in each different scene 'cause it's a third person account and that ...

    Jul 23, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Take A Chance- 14

    Hey! Post the next chapter. FAST!!!!!!!!

    Jul 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Run Away

    Well, it's her father and glad you liked it....

    May 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: fading footsteps

    THANKS A LOT, GUYS! YOU CAN'T IMAGINE MY SURPRISE THAT MY FIRST POEM RECEIVED SUCH GOOD REVIEWS. IT FEELS REALLY GREAT AND THANKS SO MUCH FOR TAKING OUT YOUR PRECIOUS ...

    Apr 26, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: New Beginning...

    First of all, thanks a lot guys for reviewing my work and thanks for all the suggestions, i will surely take them into consideration. I'm very sure that all your ...

    Apr 1, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: 0

    a real beautiful story, you should publish it, it was one of the best story i've read in a long time....... thankxxx a lot for treating me with it........

    Mar 24, 2011


pain is that feeling when you are feeling hurt, but it never goes away leaving me hurt. oh it hurts.
— Dragonthorn