ChocolateMoonLight

I read your poem, and you already know, that most people go through these emotions, a lot. A lot more than they should but I'm not that worried about them ...

This is not my story, it's just something I read and I knew that I had to share it with everyone. I know that I may not know all of ...

THANKS A LOT, GUYS! YOU CAN'T IMAGINE MY SURPRISE THAT MY FIRST POEM RECEIVED SUCH GOOD REVIEWS. IT FEELS REALLY GREAT AND THANKS SO MUCH FOR TAKING OUT YOUR PRECIOUS ...

This poem as written in the middle of the night, when I couldn't sleep, It's just something that crossed my mind, when I was thinking about love, betrayal and life ...

hey! I'm from India too and I can really identify with your writing as a Indian citizen as well as spectator to the various issues you mentioned in the poem. ...

hey! I loved your poem. It's beautifully descriptive. I could imagine the scene you described in the poem, I could actually picture it. The piece is really fabulous. Great work ...

hey! You really summed up the thing that is LOVE. You just captured the true essence of it. Its passionate, beautiful, deep and plain fabulous. I love your style of ...

hey! this is a really good story and any crush-struck teenager can identify with it. I really like your style of writing, it's fun and FRANK AND INTERESTING. I just ...

I really got interested in the PIECE OF WORK(I'm calling it that because I just read a plot a writer studies before constructing an actual story) from the start but ...

I really like your lonely and evil was quite refreshing to read the story of bad guy who feels sorry for his old dog. I liked way you started your ...

The Second Edited Version. The soft beautiful sunlight falling on the French windows of the house reflected my pallid face, the crumpled clothes, the dirty shoes I was wearing and ...

i like the way you started the story with the introduction of the character in his own words, but then i read ahead and i get a little confused because ...

i was searching for a site where i could submit my stories to anyone who would like to read and i found your's. it interested me almost immediately and i ...

i have read books of many genres but mostly before reading a book i like to read the back cover, if the back cover holds some interest for then i ...

First of all, thanks a lot guys for reviewing my work and thanks for all the suggestions, i will surely take them into consideration. I'm very sure that all your ...